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Fall:  A Guest Post By Phantomimic

9/17/2012

 
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Photo by Phantomimic. Copyright RAGG.
Phantomimic is one of my favorite writers from SCRIBD. He can write prose or poetry, and his versatility extends to wonderful book reviews, lovely emails, and a thoughtful BLOG. Here he shares a piece about my favorite season, Fall. 


Fall is here; winter is approaching.

On this crisp cool day the sunlight breaks with more ease through the branches, but still struggles to warm the ground.

I take a deep breath and sigh; one more year has gone by.

Squirrels dart around gathering as much food as possible, furtive robins jump around hunting for a morsel to beef up their reserves, and noisy V-shaped formations of geese fly south.

Still lingering on soon to be barren branches, leaves dangle like delicate ornaments and flutter like mobiles in the wind.

The dying appendages from the glory days of spring and summer delight us with the tint of their demise. When else in our lives do we revel in the outcomes of the process of death and decay? When?

I'm not the one that I once was. My body too is beyond its glory days, now approaching the autumn of my life. Not unlike the leaves around me, I feel life slowly draining away, and in my dreams I see visions of walking sticks, hospitals, and funerals.

The green in the landscape has been slowly vanishing, chased away by splotches of red and yellow, like a disease spreading from the tips to the stems.

The sunlight seeping through the thinning foliage seems to decompose as if going through a prism producing a rainbow of colors.

It resembles an artist's palette of gold, green, orange, and red, or a treasure chest bursting with rubies, emeralds, jaspers, and opals.

All around me oaks and maples explode ablaze as if engulfed in bright red and yellow flames.

There is amazing beauty in this, and yet....and yet....

Lost in thought I think of the magnificent trees all around me.

At least they have rings to show for the toils and troubles of each year of their lives. But they too will fall and decompose into soil, or be hacked into firewood, or be converted into paper to wipe asses or write poetry.

Leaves tumble to the ground. A few lucky ones fall in wet areas of the pavement and rot leaving behind black imprints; everyone knows how important it is to leave your mark.

The leaves on the ground at first retain some of their color, but then turn into dull shades of brown dotting the landscape with ordinariness; death is less noticeable when it's boring.

They are dry and twisted like mummies that have drifted forever in the sea of time.

I step on them and they disintegrate making crunching sounds. They crumble so easily under my foot, just as we all crumble so easily under the relentless pressure of age.

The leaves blow with the wind tracing the air currents and spiral in the whirlwinds of the late afternoon rising like the souls of the dearly departed.

I look at the vanishing sun; twilight is approaching, winter is approaching.

Soon the branches will be naked.

Soon the leaves in our backyards will be burned or placed in the trash.

Soon winter will arrive covering the land with a cold, still, white shroud.

And then, then I will wonder, "What is the point?" Yes, what IS the point?

What is the point of one more year?

What is the point of one more tree ring?

What is the point of one more crop of pretty dead leaves?

What is the point....of one more poem?

But not today, no, NOT TODAY!

Today, I will walk into the modest house of my happiness, the one that I erected in the same lot where I had planned to build the skyscraper of my dreams, and I will be content with it!

Today, I will appreciate beauty for its own sake regardless of its nature!

Today, I will relish life and what it has given me, and I will not dwell on what it will eventually take away from me!

Today, I will live the magic of the moment, and I will forget the unchangeable past and the unpredictable future!

Today, I will love!

Today, I will sing!

Today, I will laugh!

Today....today....

....I will write a poem.


by Phantomimic

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Laura Novak
9/17/2012 02:23:06 am

Thank you so much, Phantomimic, for providing us with this evocative poem. I am always energized in the fall, I don't know why. But you remind us that it's not typically thought of as a season for beginnings. We are supposed to get dark and deep and shed our inner and outer essences. Yet, we find hope. If nothing else, by looking at what's right in front of us, as you say, the house we've built, not the one we ought to have built. And when in doubt, write a poem! Beautiful work. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Rolando link
9/17/2012 10:47:29 am

Thank you very much for having me over Laura, and also glad to see you up and running again!

grannyj
9/17/2012 03:09:34 am

Thank you Phantomimic for your thought-provoking and very beautiful writing. Thank you Laura for sharing this with us. I used to love spring- but now I love fall. I know that the days start to get longer at the end of December and winter no longer feels like it will last forever. Fall no longer feels like an ending. This is the first fall that we are not in PEI. But it is there, looking out at the sometimes angry, but always gloriously powerful Atlantic, that I learned to love fall. The thought that it will still be there, long after I am gone, brings me great comfort.

Rolando link
9/17/2012 10:51:08 am

Thank you for your comment grannyj. I always like Fall because of the colors, but one day I thought about what those colors represent and from the contrast came this poem.

mistah charley, ph.d.
9/17/2012 08:10:33 am

“Woods, A Prose Sonnet”
by Ralph Waldo Emerson

Wise are ye, O ancient woods! wiser than man.
Whoso goeth in your paths or into your thickets where no paths are,
readeth the same cheerful lesson whether he be a young child or a hundred years old.
Comes he in good fortune or bad, ye say the same things, & from age to age.
Ever the needles of the pine grow & fall, the acorns on the oak, the maples redden in autumn,
& all times of the year the ground pine & the pyrola bud & root under foot.
What is called fortune & what is called Time by men—ye know them not.
Men have not language to describe one moment of your eternal life.
This I would ask of you, o sacred Woods, when ye shall next give me somewhat to say,
give me also the tune wherein to say it.
Give me a tune of your own like your winds or rain or brooks or birds;
for the songs of men grow old when they have been often repeated,
but yours, though a man have heard them for seventy years, are never the same, but always new,
like time itself, or like love.

Rolando link
9/17/2012 10:56:04 am

Beautiful mistah, that is maybe what the trees and their leaves gave me. A tune to hum to hope and permanence in the face of the ephemeral.

Laura Novak
9/17/2012 09:34:40 am

Thank you, Mistah Charley, for this lovely poem. Here, time is new, though we're talking about a season that represents decay, darkness, the shortening of things...even lives. Beautiful language. Thank you both!

Steve U - the Jotter link
9/17/2012 11:38:01 am

Today you made a good choice, both of you, Laura for starting the series, Rolando for the poem. Fall is a time for walks and when we walk we stir the fallen leaves. You do that with this poem, my friend!

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:07:34 pm

Thanks Jotter. When we stir the leaves we often stir the memories.

V-A
9/17/2012 10:55:19 pm

Thanks, P -- for your images of fall. This is the hardest time of year for me since southern CA doesn't have fall. Through your words, I can walk through the leaves of my mind and memories.

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:08:37 pm

Thanks V-A, glad you like it! : ^ )

Barbara Alfaro link
9/18/2012 01:19:36 am

Thank you Rolando (a/k/a Phantomimic) for this heartwarming essay. Fall has always been my favorite time of time and you capture the reasons why in your writing. Loved "the modest house of my happiness." Your photograph is beautiful.

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:10:57 pm

Thanks Barbara. I now love the modest house of my happiness too. But it has taken some practice to achieve that!

Ingrid Ricks link
9/18/2012 03:11:28 am

Phanto- I love this poem. It's such a good reminder of how fast time passes, and how important it is to embrace the moment and enjoy the time we have to the fullest. Plus there is just something magical about Fall in general. Thanks for this.

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:12:27 pm

Thanks Ingrid. Long time no see. Glad to see all the old Scribd crowd getting together here at Laura's blog!

Laura Novak
9/18/2012 04:18:20 am

Yes, thanks again to Phanto...and for that fabulous photo! It offers a remarkable counterpoint to the poem and reminds us that all is not dark and decaying in the fall. Just imagine: a man who can write poetry, prose, and take fabulous photographs! Always glad to share you work with the world, Rolando!! Thank you again.

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:13:40 pm

Thanks Laura, eclectic is my middle name.

suzanne link
9/18/2012 04:55:30 am

I always love the soft voice of your work, Phanto...and teh New England of your fall smells crisp and clear through my Georgia window.

Rolando link
9/18/2012 12:18:25 pm

And of course Suzanne. It's like in the good old days of Scribd. Thank you very much! : ^ )

Laura Novak
9/19/2012 02:29:41 am

Thank you again Rolando for writing and staying in touch with everyone here. And yes, it's been lovely seeing so many wonderful writers and readers here together again! New post up, with more wonderful fall pieces coming from more of you!!

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6/6/2013 10:25:43 pm

The poem about the falling of leaves during the winter season is a thrilling one to read and the lyrics are beautifully composed. I doubt if I had seen such a soothing lyrics before and thanks for this exciting post that fills every readers into joy.


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