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Work In Progress: Broken Glass

10/1/2012

 
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Gates took a swing at his face, which cause me to suck wind and grab the arm of a server carrying a tray of teensy juice glasses. One shattered to the paving stone temporarily causing the crowd to shudder before turning back to the scene on the lawn. Somehow, the man had fallen and Gates was now fully on top of him. The repeated smack of his fist against the man’s skin was horrifying. The mother screamed. The father cursed. Several guests flew onto the lawn outdoing one another with their own shouts and curses. They started to pull Gates away but not before the man, now grasping his eye and nose, gave a final yank to Gates’ ponytail, which gave him a clear shot at the pale face sunken with grief. With near comedic timing the teams pulled their fighters apart and headed for opposite corners of the grassy mat.

My hands flew to my mouth. Others were equally speechless. While some mourners escorted Gates to the patio, no one else acknowledged the young man, now creeping down the lawn, his parents holding him up on either side, back toward Lake Anza Road where they had apparently parked.  No one, that is, besides my photographer who had come around a tree mid way down the lawn and, as I would learn later, fired off her motor drive throughout the entire episode. Head down at an angle to accommodate her good eye and engrossed in the view-finder of the digital camera, she hiked toward the road nearly smacking into an old oak on her way.

Friends diverted Gates to a bench, the one nearest the statue of Major Tilden smiling like a big stone idiot in the center of the patio. With a hankie pressed to his bloodied nose, Gates now appeared as dazed as he did in his kitchen. The world would be blurring for me too. I certainly didn’t expect him to identify me out of the dozens of mourners there to honor Amy.

So what happened next surprised me. Just as someone ordered a server to get some ice and another hollered for a blanket, Gates lifted his head with his icy blue eyes now fully dilated and said in the coldest of tones, “You want to be a reporter again? Then nab my wife’s killer. If I’m not mistaken, he’s probably back in his car by now. You can probably catch him before he drives out of the park.”


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Copyright:  Laura Novak, 2012

grannyj
10/1/2012 09:06:23 pm

Oh yeah! This is going to be good. I love the details- I can picture the whole scene here.

Barbara Alfaro link
10/2/2012 04:47:53 am

Gripping, terrific descriptions. I hope you keep on with this one.

Karen J
10/2/2012 10:12:08 am

"One shattered to the paving stone temporarily causing the crowd to shutter before turning back to the scene on the lawn."

Shutter? Or shudder?

Laura Novak
10/3/2012 02:00:05 am

Thanks all. And thank YOU Karen J for pointing that out! That's why it takes a village.

SteveU (The Jotter)
10/7/2012 09:02:09 am

A great start! Right into the heart of it!

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